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starfield, of empty pitch and
streaking sun flares 'cross glass,
'cross windows, through soul mirrors
sunder you one self from the next
sugar and honeyed violets split
between quarter sides, lucky penny
neither sweeter, hush and pounce
to which do i make acquaintance?
splintered sight, oh spin roulette
sunder me one self from the next
agave and candied ginger split
between die faces, lucky number four
neither sweeter, melodious and trite
to which do you make acquaintance?
streaking sun flares 'cross glass,
'cross starfield of empty pitch.

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I love this. the sounds are beautiful.

1 hour ago, drowntown said:

splintered sight, oh spin roulette
sunder me one self from the next
agave and candied ginger split

I just want to wrap myself in your alliteration and vowel sounds.

Your word choice makes the poem evoke pretty images and strong aromas and flavors.

 

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I feel like this could be some sort of structured poem? (Read: please write a prompt/rules for this so I can try it out.)

 

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4 hours ago, drowntown said:

holy shit this was harder than i expected????

Yay, I have a poetry project for the evening! Many thanks. :) 

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