reachingthrough_flames 15 Posted March 31 rough hands smooth chalk calluses I need to make it to the top Shaking hands Bleeding nails I won't leave until I make it to the top sweaty back there is fire in my veins I need to jump down straining arms aching fingers it hurts too much Jump note: This is about climbing but also other stuff Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
queenie_flower 244 Posted April 4 Okay so I just told Jess this but I have like no constructive criticism this second but really lovely job, this feels powerful in a very I’ve-achieved-something type of tone. I feel like you could make this into a longer poem if you wanted. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apollo's Lover 59 Posted April 4 I didn't see the tag, and I thought the whole thing was the title. I still like it best all together. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites