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warm wet of overcast December days 
That smell of damp attics 
Dusty and cluttered
Remind me of things that should not be
Like children lost at a carnival
Balloons floating freely in the sky
And 
A Grandmothers cold words 
People do not see the devastation that they are creating with careless acts of mindlessness
They do not see these warm December days 
Of warm attics as a problem
And those who do are faced with 
Empty words of false promises 
Or violent poison on a vipers tong 
As they watch the world fade away into the once peaceful empty blue sways of nothingness
 

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i really like your use of simile, bc you chose things that are seemingly innocent, but in reality cause damage, just as the warm December. It made me stop and assess. Yes. Exactly.

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26 minutes ago, mouse said:

i really like your use of simile, bc you chose things that are seemingly innocent, but in reality cause damage, just as the warm December. It made me stop and assess. Yes. Exactly.

 Thank you :)

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