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  1. can you just fucking not do that because i’m a rational girl independent learning to be strong trying harder than you ever seem to and like you’re throwing me off a lot can you just stop interrupting my thoughts? please? can you just not smile quite like that when you step in my way just so I’ll bump into you and like my name? if you could dim the light in your eyes across your face before you say that particular combination of syllables it would really help me sleep at night can you just look at the paper when i’m trying to help you you’ll understand the material better and i know that you can because if you can possibly talk about that many other things with that type of skill and you’re asking my bad-at-math ass to help you you must be pretty fucking desperate can you just (while you’re at it) stop making me fucking laugh i’m supposed to be taking notes and you’re over there calling out comments looking at me when i stifle a laugh fuck you now i want to make you laugh stop making me consider texting you at goddamn one am because i thought of something funny stop making me say stupid shit because you saying that one time that i looked like a classy prostitute was definitely not supposed to be responded to with a question if it was working especially if your expression shifted to that maybe it was the dark you paid for my dinner i had agreed to buy you coffee and that lady she thought we were dating? she called us cute? and you essentially ran away (you went upstairs. very fast) you barely finished ordering i overthought it i nearly ordered with your name (it would have been easier for them to read aloud i had the excuse planned in case i had made that mistake i hadn’t) you grabbed my arm so i wouldn’t walk into the street i didn’t even notice the street or much else i don’t remember any cars, though (was i like this even then? fuck.)
  2. Breakup untitled

    feel better marshall
  3. untitled (candlelight stars)

    Snap at me If you would just say something do something That would be appreciated Look at me but see me Is that too much to ask? Tell me that I’m enough even if not for you Remind me that I actually mean something to you because we both know it Your face lights up unless I’m seeing stars where only candles flicker I don’t care if you shove me against the damn wall Just react when I speak when I move Because I can push you back I can be the one that pushes you on You say nothing when I pour my life into your lap You let me feel like everything and nothing all at once And maybe I’m not drowning but I’m certainly out of my depth
  4. Lioness

    I really love this? So much? And that’s why I don’t write much about my siblings ever, too, because what do you say about someone you’ve known their whole life and sum them up in a poem? But I feel like you did an awesome job. Your sister seems amazing.
  5. Overheard Quotes

    "I'm pregnant!" "I'm sorry for your loss" "Is Bridger an African American or a white American?" "Bridger is a dog" "How's being dead?" "10/10 would die again" "That's so fake. Like you!" "Sierra's gonna stay in the church nursery because she loves children more than jesus" "I don't know what the senior prank is gonna be, but I can guarantee it'll be lame because they haven't asked me to help yet"
  6. Untitled

    First of all beautiful, publish it. Definitely. Title idea: catch the ones that fly critique to come soon, I promise One thing before I forget: Maybe try after “for skinning and eating” “but instead with butterfly nets/ because like butterflies/ they are caught for their beauty” Mention the net again so it gives a stronger contrast.
  7. To the top/jump

    Okay so I just told Jess this but I have like no constructive criticism this second but really lovely job, this feels powerful in a very I’ve-achieved-something type of tone. I feel like you could make this into a longer poem if you wanted.
  8. sometimes anger turns to fuel in liquid fire veins

    I really love this whole poem and I really should critique things here more often but these are some of my favorite lines. Awesome job, wish I had constructive criticism but I’m mostly just here to love and support people right now.
  9. These Arms

    this is so soft and adorable
  10. untitled i

    the “should have” may beckon you but I pray to you, turn away. for even if it glitters prismatic under the light when tilted the “would you” sneaks in from the shadows if you fall from that rabbit hole that blade of possibility will become your undoing splitting every hair into infinite halves turn away love or the silence that burnt my tongue will soon match yours temper that boils over and logic that melts at a single touch i may have carried the world but now you hold it like it is nothing and I pray to you turn away before the “could i” creeps from underneath the crust and four and twenty blackbirds nest in our hearts somewhere a bell tolls and somewhere else, vengeance is ours but yet not in this universe, for the reckoning has not yet trickled down and the cracks in the stone below that waterfall have not yet grown to let more than droplets pass so until that day comes turn away for we will try to hear you but over the roar of the boiling water and through the clamorous birdsong in our souls there can only be pain turn away and let the light trickle in with the water
  11. what happens when you procrastinate before you take a shower

    Beautiful words. Impactful words. You beat me again, I was literally going to write something like this. I’m sorry there’s another person out there who’s not sure if they’re beautiful or not, and I feel like saying that you are even though I’ve never seen you would just reinforce the “They’re just saying that” aspect, which I know I struggle with. Learn to love yourself, and believe other people sometimes. Just a little bit at a time. It will get better. Also if the collarbone thing is intentional, please stop yourself before you go past the point of no return. Sorry I didn’t critique the poem much, it was just a little too close to home. queenie out
  12. Exquisite Corpse March 2018

    never did I think that chaos would be my home but the silence when it is absent is chaos in itself
  13. Plea for help

    Um hi yes I’m also very late and I’m sorry but all of us understand that you have limitations and that not everything works for you all the time. Know that we are here, and that you are important, and we respect you for having the strength to exist and to have the courage to say something. I might not give the best advice, but I can try. If you feel like you need to talk to someone, I’m here, too. The only advice I have for you is to keep trying to talk, and to think about why you need to stay alive. If you have a plant you need to water, or a friend who would be devastated, or even just a book you need to finish or a dog to pet or a specific food you need to eat, remember that your existence is important. I know that people have already give you this advice, but I feel like reiterating it is important to some degree. And to keep repeating the same stuff people have said: the discord is a good place to talk to people. The other day I was really freaking out about something that didn’t even happen recently, and I talked to someone on there. And they listened. My hands were literally shaking at the beginning of the conversation, and by the end of it I felt calmer, and a little more fortified. People are on your side. And even if you don’t want to dump your heart into someone’s lap, we’re ridiculous enough there to give you something else to think about. Stay strong. We respect you.
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