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  1. Looking at my journal, I notice that there aren't that many pages. This makes me sad, because it is a really old and used to be my dad's, a memory of the good old days, seeing the happy side of him that we rarely see now.

  2. damn i just realized, your pics, Totoro and Kiki's delivery service, and your name is from Percy Jackson right?

     

    1. thepensword

      thepensword

      Yes on the Kiki and the Totoro, no on the Percy Jackson. The username is a play on “the pen is mightier than the sword”.

    2. Connor

      Connor

      i'm a Percy Jackson nerd so thats what my mind goes to first. still thats cool.

    3. thepensword

      thepensword

      Understandable. I used to be a PJO nerd so I get it.

  3. fingers interlaced

    capitalize the i this is wayyy better than i could do :)
  4. I'm Tired of This

    wow that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  5. Love

    What is love? Love is the feeling of falling: The flying feeling of weightlessness— The fear of loss at any moment. Love is the time before dawn: The sky growing more beautiful by the moment, The silence, intentional and calm. Love is the meaning of life: The ups and downs that define it, The moments of pure joy and utter sadness. He was right: she is beautiful: She is kind, and caring and smart, I love you to the stars and back Kate, Don't ever forget that. Author's note: i wrote this yesterday as some of you know, thanks @thepensword. I gave this poem to my girlfriend as a Valentine's Day gift.
  6. @thepensword can you please edit this valentines day is tomorrow and i am in a panic.

     

    Love,

    what is love?

     

    Love is the feeling of falling,

         The flying feeling of weightlessness,

         And the fear of loss at any moment.

     

    Love is the time before dawn,

         The sky growing more beautiful by the moment,

         And the silence, intentional and calm.

     

    Love is the meaning of life, 

         The ups and downs that define it,

         The moments of pure joy and utter sadness.

     

    He was right, she is beautiful,

         She is kind, and caring and smart, 

         I love you to the stars and back Kate,

         Don't ever forget that.

     

    -Connor

     

    "He was right, she is beautiful," He, is her late grandfather, this is a refrence to his last words, looking at a picture of her.

     

    BTW I will post this tomorrow

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    2. Connor

      Connor

      thank you you saved my procrastinating ass 

    3. thepensword

      thepensword

      np! happy valentine's day!

    4. Connor
  7. As I hope you know, St. Valentine's day is tomorrow. Naturally, I wrote my girlfriend a poem, and I desperately need it edited. I hope this isn't to much to ask. 

     

    Love,

    what is love?

     

    Love is the feeling of falling,

         The flying feeling of weightlessness,

         And the fear of loss at any moment.

     

    Love is the time before dawn,

         The sky growing more beautiful by the moment,

         And the silence, intentional and calm.

     

    Love is the meaning of life, 

         The ups and downs that define it,

         The moments of pure joy and utter sadness.

     

    He was right, she is beautiful,

         She is kind, and caring and smart, 

         I love you to the stars and back Kate,

         Don't ever forget that.

     

    -Connor

     

    "He was right, she is beautiful," He, is her late grandfather, this is a refrence to his last words, looking at a picture of her.

     

    BTW I will post this tomorrow

    1. writeandleft

      writeandleft

      holy c r a p this is beautiful I don't think you need to change it at all

  8. funny childhood stories

    1) Queenie, waldorf school? 2) i'v had friends who were the cause of un-planed fire drills 3) pleese tell me that at the age of 4 wanted to be Mike *Roe* *i am 90% sure that thats not how you spell his name but whatever*
  9. no school !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ice day !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    but i have a crap ton of homework

  10. Chocolate

    It reminds me of the book, The Book Thief
  11. Summary of my Hell of a Life:

    Early January: I read 13 Reasons Why in one night.

    January and early February: Nothing abnormal here, moving on.

    Last Friday: my school's barn dance, Zach and West got in a fight. I found out that my girlfriend (Kate) has depression and has thought of killing herself.

    Saturday: I called her, but she wasen't home, naturally that freaked me out. 

    Sunday: She called me, right after the Super Bowl (we are both eagles fans), probably the high point of her weekend. The call lasted 1hr 46min.

    Monday: Me, Micaela, Courtney, and Zach did what friends do, and made her tell her mom.

    Tuesday: I started getting sick, Kate looked depressed all day.

    Wednesday: Native Youth Olympics for the 4th graders. the cold affected my head and I couldn't think, we were out of Sudafed. Kate looked happier, I think.

    Today: After going to Walgreens to get Sudafed, I could think properly. Kate looked fine. I didn't talk with her on the deck today, so she dosen't get sick.

    1. Connor

      Connor

      also I have 3 late essays. 

    2. flamecoloredglowstick

      flamecoloredglowstick

      oh dude im sorry

    3. writeandleft

      writeandleft

      I really hope things get better for you (and Kate)!! sending <333333

  12. Blue Blood Eclipse

    Once in 157 years, but was it worth it? A day of disfunction, distraction, drama, and death. but hey at least you got pics right?
  13. My pessimistic brain

    Pain gives meaning too a life that would choke on the monotony. darkness brings relief to eyes clouded with pessimism, and the chaos that blinds. So I close my eyes, and darkness I see. Then breaking the silence, pale hands caressing short, black hair. Then, a dark haired man, too tall to be me. A blond woman, too curly to be you. Two children calmly playing. Then last a funeral, A tombstone. CA 2003-2031 KA 2006-2031 "Love until the end. I guess it wasn't enough." I wake wondering, and then it comes. Pain is meaning, Meaning is love, Love is loss, Loss is pain, and the circle continues. lost in love is meaning and pain. Author's note: CA is my initials KA are my GF's initials I am a pessimist
  14. My pessimistic brain

    Pain gives meaning too a life that would choke on the monotony. darkness brings relief to eyes clouded with pessimism, and the chaos that blinds. So I close my eyes, and darkness I see. Then breaking the silence, pale hands caressing short, black hair. Then, a dark haired man, too tall to be me. A blond woman, too curly to be you. Two children calmly playing. Then last a funeral, A tombstone. CA 2003-2031 KA 2006-2031 "Love until the end. I guess it wasn't enough." I wake wondering, and then it comes. Pain is meaning, Meaning is love, Love is loss, Loss is pain, and the circle continues. lost in love is meaning and pain.
  15. Peeps, is this fit for posting?

    Pain gives meaning

     too a life that would

    choke on the monotony.

     

    darkness brings relief

    to eyes clouded with pessimism,

    and the chaos that blinds.

     

    So I close my eyes,

    and darkness I see.

     

    Then breaking the silence,

    pale hands caressing

    short, black hair.

     

    Then, a dark haired  man, too tall to be me.

    A blond woman, too curly to be you.

    Two children calmly playing.

     

    Then last a funeral, 

    A tombstone.

     

    CA   2003-2031

    KA   2006-2031

    "Love until the end. I guess it wasn't enough."

     

    I wake wondering,

    and then it comes.

     

    Pain is meaning,

    Meaning is love,

    Love is loss,

    Loss is pain,

    and the circle continues.

     

    lost in love is meaning and pain.

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    2. queenie_flower

      queenie_flower

      First, go submit it. It’s great. 

      that’s always my advice to submit it, btw bc it’s easier to find and also the same people are seeing it so *shrugs* this isn’t official

      also I get not wanting to submit crap. But don’t worry about that bc we all do sometimes. I have literally written stuff to post straight in the submission box and posted it anyway

    3. writeandleft

      writeandleft

      wow I really like this!! I do have a few suggestions but they're mostly grammar/mechanics related so here goes:

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      Pain gives meaning,

       to a life that would,

      choke on the monotony

      I'd say get rid of both commas, they interrupt the flow. also you might add a period at end of the stanza to be consistent with the rest of the poem.

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      darkness brings relief,

      Quote

      pale hands caressing,

      grammatically, no commas here either.

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      Then, a dark haired  man, too tall to be me.

      A blond haired woman, hair to curly to be yours.

      I like these lines. I have a suggestion, though, if you want to parallel them more -- maybe change the second line to "a blonde woman, too curly haired to be you" to fit with the direction of the first line more??? does that make any sense??

      (also the word "to" should have two "o"s in the second line, but that's probably just a slip-up)

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      "Love until the end, I guess it wasn't enough."

      ooh I also love this, but I feel like it might be more striking as two sentences -- "love until the end. I guess it wasn't enough."

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      Pain is meaning,

      Meaning is love,

      love is loss,

      loss is pain,

      and the circle continues.

       

      lost in love is meaning and pain.

      wowow I love this ending! I'd just say be consistent with capitalization.

       

      overall this is a beautiful poem! it's well written and powerful. keep writing my friend!!!

    4. Connor

      Connor

      thanks peeps

      my mom keeps lecturing me that people don't want to read in edited work

      😎🤓😜

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